JMNT(i)
5 Yet down from your hardness (or: in line with and in accord to your obstinacy)
and an unrepentant heart (= unchanged thinking and affection in the center of your being)
you habitually collect and lay up stores of personal emotion in yourself (or: progressively treasure up to yourself inherent fervor, passionate impulse and a mental bent or a disposition; or: periodically bank for yourself anger, indignation or wrath)
within a day of personal emotion (fervor; passion; anger; etc.)
and of an unveiling of a decision of rightwising from God (or: of a revealing of God’s verdict regarding fair and equitable dealing; of an uncovering of a just judgment which is God; of a disclosure of a separation for a decision having the character of the Way pointed out from God; disclosure from God's right evaluation),
6 Who will progressively award in each person (or: give back to each one; pay for each one)
down from (in line with; in accord to; to the level of)
his works (actions; deeds):
7 in those (to those; for those),
on the one hand, in accord with [
the]
patient endurance (humbly remaining under for persistent support)
of a good work (or: virtuous action) [
who]
are constantly seeking glory (a good reputation; a manifestation of that which calls forth praise)
and honor (value; worth)
and incorruptibility (or: incorruption) –
life which belongs to, is connected with, and is proper to the Age (or: eonian life; the life of and for the ages).
8 Yet, on the other hand, in those (to those; for those)
out of a work for ambitious, factious or contentious purposes, and in (or: by)
being continuously incompliant (disobedient; unwilling to be persuaded)
to (or: by)
the Truth (reality; veritable essence),
but constantly compliant (obedient; persuaded)
in, to, by and for the injustice (inequity; that which is not in accord with the Way pointed out), [
there will be]
personal emotion (or: inherent fervor; passionate impulse; anger; indignation; wrath; a habit of mind; a mental bent or disposition)
and rushing of feelings (or: intense passion of the mind; violent breathing; glowing animation; turbulent commotion of the mind; or: rage; fury),
9 pressure (affliction; trouble; tribulation; ordeal)
and squeezed narrowness (tight restriction; distress; anguish) –
upon every soul of mankind which is persistently in himself working down and effecting the bad (the ugly; the worthless; the evil; the injurious; the bad situation; the worthless quality; the malicious intent) –
both of a Jew, first, and also of a Greek (or: one of the Hellenist culture);
10 but yet glory (a manifestation of that which calls forth praise; a credible reputation)
and honor (value; worth)
and peace (or: harmony; [=Shalom])
in, to, for and with everyone habitually working and accomplishing in himself the Good (or: the virtuous and excellent)
both in, to, and for a Jew, first, and also in, to and for a Greek (or: Hellenist);
11 for partiality (favoritism; receiving on the basis of faces, countenances or personalities)
does not exist alongside of God (or: by God’s side; = with God or in His presence and dealings).
12 For you see, as many as (or: however many)
miss the goal (or: sin; fail; or: erred; missed the target due to lack of ability or through distraction)
without (a)
law [= Torah?],
without (a)
law will progressively lose and continue destroying themselves; and as many as (or: however many)
within law (or: within [the] Law [= Torah])
miss the goal (sin; sinned; fail; deviated),
through law (or: [the] Law)
will be judged (separated, evaluated and decided upon),